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NAME!
bluefur,
GENDER!
female,
AGE!
twentythreemoons,
CLAN!
stormclan,
RANK!
deputy,

APPEARANCE!
bluefur`s head is shaped like an upside down, lopsided mountain! her muzzle and chin area is the 'summit' and it expands wider toward the cheekbones and the top of the head is nicely rounded. at the top of her head sits two leaf-shaped ears. bluefur has bright, sapphire blue eyes and what makes them pop and catch attention is that a dark, narrow line is outlined around them. her eyes are big and round and its colour and texture represents her gentle and calmness like the ocean. her eyes keep this gentle texture when she is in a neutral mood, it glows brighter to show her energy and happiness and transforms to a dull grey-blue when she is in a terrible state. she has a dark dusty-coloured, upside-down, rounded triangular nose. her muzzles are tinted a frosty-silvery colour with thin, clear whiskers attatched.

bluefur wears a thin coat of blue-grey fur. it contains a variety of nice ocean blue shades that range from a dark blue-grey fur to a stunning silvery-blue colour. her fur looks spikey but it feels very soft and smooth. in winter her fur grows to a medium length that`s just enough to keep her warm through the arctic months and then they return back to their normal short length when the warm days arrive. bluefur has three different-sized blotches of white on her left ankle.

bluefur is small, even if she bristles her fur to look menacing to other cats, she still appears to be small but she does have some advantages. her frame is slender looking but that`s just her muscles, so she really has a slim build. bluefur has long, powerful legs designed for running, climbing and often used in battles.

bluefur has long, vicious, thorn-sharp claws and terrifying canines that it reminds two-legs and possibly cats of the sabre-toothed tiger. bluefur has a husky voice. her voice sounds magical and very peaceful. when her voice is raised, it sounds like a loud, harsh whisper with a soft wheezing at the end of her words.



PERSONALITITY!
bluefur




DISABILITIES!
bluefur is blind in her right eye. she was born with this unfortunate disability.



HISTORY!
(in roleplay form, i found it easier this way to type the history)
the sky was dotted with shimmering stars. it was dark and tranquil and the trees swung their branches gently with the fresh, cool breeze. two felines sheltered beneath an overhanging tree and huddled closely together.

the lanky tree was struck by lightning and soon bursted up into flames. "this way!" honeyfoot, a dark cream-coloured she-cat raised her voice. three broad cats raced to honeyfoot panting heavily. "where`s Ashfur and Ivoryspots?" the dark cream-coloured warrior asked. the three glanced at each other then one of them pointed with its nose at the two figures who were making their way towards them. suddenly the ablazed tree plunged heavily to the thirsty soil and the two figures twisted their bodies away from the tree. "ashfur! ... Ivoryspots!" the warriors on the opposite side shouted repeatedly hoping for a reply.

ashfur, Ivoryspots, Honeyfoot and the three other Stormclan warriors were sent on a rescue mission and are now separated. ashfur and Ivoryspots are struggling to find their way back home.

"do you think we`ll ever find our way back?" Ivoryspots addressed Ashfur while gazing up at the glowing stars. ashfur hesitated then finally some words escaped his throat. "we will." the lost Stormclan warriors gazed at the Silverpelt and soon rested their heads and fell into a deep sleep. three long moons have passed and the two warriors still haven`t found their way back. they soon turned into loners and thought that Stormclan would`ve forgotten them by now or maybe even thought they were hunting with Starclan now. a few more moons passed and Ivoryspots was going to give birth in several more days. ashfur died two days before his first kit was born. he had spotted a plump meal across the thunderpath and ran across it without thinking. ashfur had suddenly heard mewing noises so he spun his body around and a white monster collided into him. ivoryspot`s ears perked up at the sound of a screeching monster then she remembered that Ashfur said he was going to hunt there. she sprung to her feet and rushed toward the thunderpath and found the grey, motionless body of Ashfur in the middle of the thunderpath. ivoryspots dragged her mate off the thunderpath and mourned his loss, she was heavily devastated.

ablue-grey kitten was born on a stormy night. ivoryspots named her kit Blizzard. blizzard`s mother stayed close to her young kitten. two quarter moons had passed since Blizzard lifted her eyelids open and shortly mastered her walking skills.

an unexpected flood raged in. there was really no time for anyone to escape but Ivoryspots and Blizzard managed to scramble onto a branch. the water continued on rising higher and higher. ivoryspots gripped tightly onto Blizzard`s scruff and leaped from crown to crown. water splashed against the tree Ivoryspots was about to spring from, the loud splash surprised her and she lost balance. before Ivoryspots plunged into the deep water, she tossed her head toward a high boulder and Blizzard flew across to it. as Ivoryspot`s head slipped under the water, a flash of white bounced off the boulder Blizzard was on and dived underneath the water. blizzard wriggled about on the boulder, scared. two heads appeared above the water and the stranger swam Ivoryspots toward Blizzard. the stranger gripped onto the boulder and plucked Ivoryspots out of the cold water. "honeyfoot!" Ivoryspots exclaimed and started to choke. "ashfur got run over by a monster, I know because I was inside that monster with other cats!" Honeyfoot told the choking she-cat. "honeyfoot, you`ve been a great friend .. take care of Blizzard." Ivoryspots` body stopped heaving. honeyfoot knew right away who Blizzard was, she wrapped her tail around the kitten and weeped as her closest friend joined Starclan.

"tell me the story again about how you and your leader trained together!" Blizzard urged her guardian, Honeyfoot to tell another story about the clans. honeyfoot shook her head and tucked the two and a half moon kitten to sleep. honeyfoot had noticed how obvious Blizzard wanted to be part of a clan. she decided to let Stormclan raise Blizzard, tomorrow they would start travelling there.

"are we almost at Stormclan?" Blizzard squealed with excitement. honeyfoot shook her head and suddenly there was a boisterous noise and three large dogs were ambushing down the hill toward the two cats. the two felines were chased by the fiery dogs through a strong gale which made it difficult for Blizzard to stay on her feet. a huge brown tom pounded down the hill and flung himself at the smallest canine mammal. blizzard lost balance and stumbled over, the largest dog was about to finish her off when a tiny black figure tumbled over and rolled Blizzard and itself away from the growling beast. honeyfoot gathered Blizzard and the black kitten behind some bushes then charged into battle beside the brown tom. the dogs fled the fight as they were defeated. "thank you," the dark cream-coloured she-cat said to the tom and, "I`m Honeyfoot." the she-cat spun around with the muscular tom and padded toward the two kittens. "call me Snap." the tom replied and gasped as he saw a black body near the bushes and raised his voice. "I thought I told you to stay in the ditch, Snake!" snake, the black kit cautiously approached his old friend and didn`t dare to look at him. "i wanted to help whether I`m too young or not to fight. I saved someone too!" snap sighed, "I`m glad you`ve saved this kit but next time, please listen to me." snake and Snap were loners who lived in a deep ditch that was situated near a halfbridge and twoleg nest. honeyfoot and Blizzard were accepted the loners` offer to shelter from the powerful storm.


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